Monday, October 1, 2007

One Breath Poetry Haiku: Snips and Snails


Snips and snails: the tank
at the nursing home. Boys play.
For Granddad, too real....


10 comments:

  1. Wow. What a contrast between the photos. Impactful haiku.

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  2. really makes you think about the difference between generations.

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  3. Very strong images and words.

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  4. This gives me a real chill. Beautiful balance.

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  5. wow, your words and photos really caught me off guard, i hope that was your intent. very effective. bravo.

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  6. He told me of a flash-back to Italy, "I smelled the diesel fumes and the dust in my nose and mouth just as I did as the tank was attempting to crush me against the brick house".

    One episode of thousands.

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  7. Very evocative. Wow, great piece.

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