Monday, September 10, 2007

Marching Orders

Shhhh... be still. Quiet.
What's God whispering? EXPLODE
"Wahoo!" and be it!

5 comments:

  1. Nicely done! Interesting take and truth!

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  2. l=Love the contrast of quiet and explosive noise. It worked!

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  3. I love your haiku. Quiet listening, then exploding into being yourself; beautiful.

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  4. I don't know whether to whisper my comment or scream it from the mountaintops. Enjoyed this so.

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