Sunday, December 30, 2007

One Breath Poetry: Frost


cold crystal mask: frost
enshrouds in vain. the hot heart
lifebeats bold within


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8 comments:

  1. SandyCarlsonDecember 30, 2007 at 7:44 PM

    This is a wonderful take on this prompt, Gypsy. How nice to think life beats can break through a shroud. God bless you in the New Year
    Writing in Faith

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  2. Tumblewords:December 30, 2007 at 10:30 PM

    Love this! It bears re-reading and re-reading. Much there in those short three lines.

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  3. spacedlawDecember 30, 2007 at 10:47 PM

    Well expressed. despite a laer of frost, life goes on.
    Happy new year.

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  4. lissaDecember 31, 2007 at 2:59 PM

    I like the last line - it signals hope in the coldest of days.

    Thank you for visiting my blog.

    Have a wonderful New Year!

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  5. Crafty Green PoetJanuary 1, 2008 at 8:06 AM

    nice imagery, nice sentiments too!

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  6. qualcosa di belloJanuary 2, 2008 at 6:11 AM

    i very much like the hope encased in your words

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  7. SandyJanuary 3, 2008 at 9:16 PM

    Your haiku reminds us that no matter how frosty it is there is always warmth within that will chase away the cold.

    Very nicely done.

    S

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  8. EverydaythingsJanuary 4, 2008 at 2:38 AM

    I very much echo spacedlaws comment! well said!

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