Monday, October 1, 2007

One Breath Poetry Haiku: Snips and Snails


Snips and snails: the tank
at the nursing home. Boys play.
For Granddad, too real....


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10 comments:

  1. RoswilaOctober 1, 2007 at 8:38 PM

    Wow. What a contrast between the photos. Impactful haiku.

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  2. GreggoOctober 1, 2007 at 8:51 PM

    really makes you think about the difference between generations.

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  3. Tumblewords:October 1, 2007 at 11:54 PM

    Incredible contrast - wonderful!

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  4. JoOctober 2, 2007 at 2:41 AM

    Very strong images and words.

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  5. paisleyOctober 2, 2007 at 5:19 AM

    very moving....

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  6. Andromeda JazmonOctober 2, 2007 at 8:51 AM

    This gives me a real chill. Beautiful balance.

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  7. madretzOctober 2, 2007 at 9:07 AM

    wow, your words and photos really caught me off guard, i hope that was your intent. very effective. bravo.

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  8. FrankieOctober 2, 2007 at 7:39 PM

    He told me of a flash-back to Italy, "I smelled the diesel fumes and the dust in my nose and mouth just as I did as the tank was attempting to crush me against the brick house".

    One episode of thousands.

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  9. SandyCarlsonOctober 5, 2007 at 9:05 AM

    That's amazing. Wow. Thanks.

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  10. AnonymousOctober 5, 2007 at 8:16 PM

    Very evocative. Wow, great piece.

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