Tuesday, August 28, 2007

Ambushing the Eclipse

This morning
My alarm and I conspire
To ambush the Eclipse

She glimpses our shadowstalking and leaps
Through an open window into the clouds

Joining the sunrise
Waving urgently
Crying:

"Goodbye! Goodbye!"
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3 comments:

  1. AnonymousAugust 30, 2007 at 9:26 AM

    "My alarm and I conspire
    To ambush the Eclipse"

    I loved that!!

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  2. AnonymousAugust 30, 2007 at 10:25 AM

    You captured your experience through your words so eloquently.

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  3. Tumblewords:August 30, 2007 at 12:13 PM

    Sorry. Your poem is full of disappointment at missing this crimson eclipse. I caught pieces of the moon...

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