Sunday, December 30, 2007

One Breath Poetry: Frost


cold crystal mask: frost
enshrouds in vain. the hot heart
lifebeats bold within


8 comments:

  1. This is a wonderful take on this prompt, Gypsy. How nice to think life beats can break through a shroud. God bless you in the New Year
    Writing in Faith

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  2. Love this! It bears re-reading and re-reading. Much there in those short three lines.

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  3. Well expressed. despite a laer of frost, life goes on.
    Happy new year.

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  4. I like the last line - it signals hope in the coldest of days.

    Thank you for visiting my blog.

    Have a wonderful New Year!

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  5. i very much like the hope encased in your words

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  6. Your haiku reminds us that no matter how frosty it is there is always warmth within that will chase away the cold.

    Very nicely done.

    S

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  7. I very much echo spacedlaws comment! well said!

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